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She Was There
Contributed by
6_2
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:20:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He said he didn't want to commit
Then next week
A light was lit
I couldn't stand, couldn't speak
I liked him so much
I still do
I loved his touch
My feelings are true
But now I worry
Was it me
He said I'm sorry
What if, will never be
I don't know why
And it makes it so much harder
I still try
To think smarter
It was all going so well
Then I heard things
He didn't tell
They weren't true
But it was over
All so quick
Then next week
SHE WAS THERE
You say
You don't care
Then dump her
You bragging
About me
DUMP HER
Let me see
PLEASE
Copyright ©
6_2
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2004-03-15 01:20:20]
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Re: She Was There
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:49:16 AM AEST
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| Great write as usual! |
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Re: She Was There
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:14:24 AM AEST
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| Straight to point..good write. venkat |
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Re: She Was There
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by Dina on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:55:00 AM AEST
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| I hope he dumps her too. |
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Re: She Was There
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:19:32 PM AEST
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yes I'll agree straight to the point very good write.
Brandy |
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