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Gray Skies and I'm Tainted
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 01:28:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sorrow curls its fingers around me Despair grays my sky My insides are burning into ashes And my soul, it waits to die
Pain strikes me closer Nails driven into my mind Splintered are the thoughts I hold And sought will never find
Splintered is my existence Cursed is my face Tears that drown me forever And I echo out of place
Bleeding are my eyes Blue and in despair Hatred burrows into emptiness And smile onto time never there
Mystery blends tomorrow Clouded and live let be Cursed pains that taint us And these gray skies are tainting me
Paint my sky with color Spill the extra on the floor Blend with blood everlasting And I'll stand still behind the door
Dirty sheets cover my mind Stained beyond what will I'm tainted with love everlasting And I love it even still
Shroud of darkness spread over me Close my eyes Shadowed are my abilities And here this inhibited pathetic body lies
Headstone blank and sorrowful Drooping and concrete will stand You've slipped away from happiness And I'm still running as fast as I can
Oxygen has left my atmosphere Water used up on tears You've completed the puzzle And assured all of my deepest fears
Solving problems always Losing what we love to regret I wish forever as the Wisher Please let this Wisher forget
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2004-03-15 01:28:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Gray Skies and I'm Tainted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:08:53 AM AEST (User
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That was stunning and darkly poetic, I like the feeling of longing for closure that radiates from this poem. Well done. |
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Re: Gray Skies and I'm Tainted
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pompous on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 07:11:57 AM AEST (User
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awesome poem every stanza was written perfectly i love this poem |
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