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Emotions game.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 02:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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it's hit soo hard into my core,
and i can't take it any-more!
stinging sprays of blue and red,
burning deep inside my head!
scars on my body, bite marks on my arms,
stinging pain inside my palms!
it makes me frustrated, wanna fall to the ground!
it makes me wanna rise, and smash all that's around!
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deathdrop
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2004-03-15 14:32:29]
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Re: Emotions game.
(User Rating: 1 )
by MrWrite on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:22:09 PM AEST
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| Wow. This may have been a short poem, but the emotions definitely shone through. Great job. |
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