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freedom, peace, emotion, dove, see, war, fear
Contributed by
SAT
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:23:22 PM in AEST
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What does freedom mean
And what about rights
If these didn't exist
Would the world still fight
What does peace mean
And what about harmony
what if these just weren't there
would the world be happy
What does emotion mean
Or love at first sight
If these things were all made up
Would there still be daylight
What does the dove represent
If we all were to die
And Jesus Christ was all a lie
Would the dove still fly
Look past what you see
Not as far as what you hear
Now think for a minute
What is your true fear
Think about war and
Then think about sorrow
Ask yourself will there be
Much pain for tomorrow
Losing is my true fear
And war is no game
So pray for those playing it
So they may come home without shame.
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2004-03-15 16:23:22]
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Re: freedom, peace, emotion, dove, see, war, fear
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 04:29:37 PM AEST
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| like it, although one criticism! keep an eye on your wording, you can use more "vibrant" words to express yourself more deeply. i like it though! keep it up! |
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