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The Storm
Contributed by
AmandaBeth
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:07:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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memories are like a knife to my heart
smiles remembered of loves that I lost
Childhood dreams lie shattered on the floor
broken promises, love is no more
Lives that I hurt, tears that they cried
am I still the monster deep inside?
pain is my friend, i no longer feel
silence I crave, but the voices I hear
calling my name, pulling me under
trying to breathe I can hear the thunder
shaking and wet I stand to my feet
darkness consumes me, I can not leave
too many mistakes made, I am lost to the sea
drowning and falling... the storm has me.....
Copyright ©
AmandaBeth
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2004-03-15 20:07:52]
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Re: The Storm
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by Tedi on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:13:08 PM AEST
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i really felt something while reading ur poem and thats what matters most 2 me.
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Re: The Storm
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by Kie on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:15:41 PM AEST
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| So much pain and misery in this poem it just cried out to me. Wow this one got to me...Kie |
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Re: The Storm
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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| This is a short write, but very strong in its words and imagery, well done. |
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