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put your blinkers on
Contributed by
wolfdreamer
on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 08:34:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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juvenile enthusiasm for the moment
without any contemplation
for the consequence
doors open and close
watch your toes darlin'
it was laughable
the gushing words
repeated themselves
did I tell you this or that?
she smiles and you fall down
she wiggles her behind
and you pass out on the floor
I think that was the gist of it
well I hope you calm down
before you have a nasty accident
winking
smiling
smiles
sillier and sillier
by the minute
tripping
falling
out the door
ooops
~~**~~
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wolfdreamer
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2004-03-15 20:34:32]
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Re: put your blinkers on
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 10:13:42 PM AEST
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lol...I loved it !
Very well done
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Re: put your blinkers on
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:59:19 PM AEST
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Very different poem,very well written,am looking forward to reading more from you!
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Re: put your blinkers on
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 11:10:00 PM AEST
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| lmao! |
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