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Misery
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:32:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All that there is has been washed to the sea
All I know now is my own misery
Things from the past won't let go of me
I sit alone filled with my misery
The misery of people who have turned their back
The people who always told me things that I lack
I suffered through it all before but now I'll attack
I will find a way to get you people off my back
Sitting here lonely knowing the lonely are blessed
Praying here thinking about all I've confessed
But before I can leave I have one last request
All you who knew me spit on my grave while I rest
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2004-03-15 21:32:27]
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Re: Misery
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by persia on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 09:46:03 PM AEST
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Dis is very gd! U expressed ur feelings well and i liked da flow of ur poem.
Excellent write
persia |
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Re: Misery
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:56:53 AM AEST
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E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T work .......
your feelings were very
well expressed in this poem...
loved it....
.........Love.......AnGeL.......... |
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Re: Misery
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:33:07 AM AEST
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| Poetry is a good form to get things off of your mind. A good blast here and there can work wonders. Just one request smile while you are writing from bern. |
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Re: Misery
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:22:53 AM AEST
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| Great poem! The flow was excellent. Keep writing. I guess though how well you do with writing your poems you wouldn't stop writing anyway. |
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Re: Misery
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:51:01 AM AEST
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I liked this one lots, i dont like the content
because i know it true... well it seems that way
but i love the layout and rhyming scheme
works very well
BS x |
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