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Claws of Fate
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 02:27:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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And now, so I see
the complexities of it all
so now and
you; me,
where does this
GO
This so undefined,
so ambiguous,
Now, what?
i know not.
(now to ride
the claws of fate)
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-03-16 02:27:32]
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Re: Claws of Fate
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 03:38:24 AM AEST
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| Ambiguous indeed. When I read this it felt like it was being whispered to me over my shoulder with wind and some faint thunder in background. Overactive imagination, that's me. Seriously, even with only a few vague lines, I can form pictures in my mind with this poem. You've written it well. |
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