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Suicide Note
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 10:40:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Why bother to live?
We are born to die.
Why do people
crave life so?
Living only
brings pain.
I shed a single
tear as
I leave this torturous
state called living.
The tear falls and
mixes with the blood
from my wrists.
With each drop of blood
that crashes to the ground,
I remember a
painful memory,
with emotions all too
familiar.
The world starts
spinning and grows
darker and darker.
I begin to feel restful,
free of the pain.
Farewell, sweet sorrow,
good-bye, silent suffering.
Hello eternity of
freedom.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-03-16 22:40:26]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Suicide Note
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
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death isn't exactly boring, but it seems to only have one emotion - dark. good write, poetic and lovely. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by LiquidChaos on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:24:01 PM AEST
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awesome write. i really enjoy the imagery you used. keep it up!
addie |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:20:48 PM AEST
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Hey, like i said don't kill yourself, just don't,
you can find freedom else where, don't,okay just don't............ |
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Re: Suicide Note
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by jLo on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:23:43 PM AEST
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good write ..i like the dark poetry u write cause it descibes how i feel sometimes,but hey don't ever try or kill ur self..k........when i feel this way i jus listen to ozzy osborne..i like ur dark side of poetry.......keep it up
jLo |
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