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A lovely kiss
Contributed by
venkat
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:16:57 AM in AEST
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Oh! Brilliant fire! Bring me the Goddess of beauty and splendor
Who shall not desert me and shall possess me as her lovely child!
Obeisance to Her, whose face shines like a beautiful autumnal moon,
And who is adorned with jewels of gold and garlands of lotuses.
Oh! Goddess of splendor! Thou art the glory of God.
Be seated in the lotus of my heart, and be awakened
By the roars of my veins filled with flow of divine inspiration.
Thou art the embodiment of the wisdom of God, and
Manifested in the layers of the liquid gold in my heart.
Thou art shining with the hues of lovely lotuses
With upward beams of moon light that exist around thy divine self.
O Goddess of splendor ! If thou take hold of me,
My imperfections shall vanish and I shine with seven colors of Sun.
Bestow me thy beauty, fame, fortune and thy golden splendor.
And let the Queen of Victory kiss me like a faithful wife
Who shall enable me to achieve accomplishments of life!
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Dt:8-1-2003
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:18:48 AM AEST
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lotus... i haven't read that word in a long while... this is beautiful!! a good write, i'm glad it stays in your heart! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by arden on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:21:31 AM AEST
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So beautiful as always. I love this one. Great write.
Arden |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:28:16 AM AEST
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Fabulous Write
Loved It....
.........Love........AnGeL....... |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 04:18:50 AM AEST
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and a lucky Goddess she is to have such wise man's affection and deep, deep, luv.
I'm sure you are blessed to have here.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:34:21 AM AEST
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| Your wife is so lucky to have this dedication to her ... not many wives would be so blessed with such an outpouring of love like this ... a splendid write ... Jan |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:08:59 AM AEST
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| Everything you write flows with beauty and wisdom. An endless well of masterpieces. How you do it, I dunno..... Love this one Venkat.. Kie |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by doug on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:35:15 AM AEST
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as always you deliver another great poem
really enjoyed reading it, take care your friend doug |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 04:48:31 PM AEST
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Really lovely...... wow...
Jenni |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:08:11 PM AEST
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your heart is singing venkat, you lucky man.
tt |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:06:34 AM AEST
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| Excellent.. |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:20:38 AM AEST
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beautiful flow, another masterpiece painted by a true artist of words
Shari |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:37:19 AM AEST
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Glad your brain remembered it so my eyes could read.
Well done.
Larry |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:52:01 PM AEST
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I happened to fall on this poem by mistake:Glad I did or I would have missed the oppurtunity to read this. ;o) This is an exceptional tribute to your wife,I love the vocabulary expressed in this and I love each verse :"Manifested in the layers of the liquid gold in my heart.
Thou art shining with the hues of lovely lotuses"------------Such a splendid piece!
Kudos on such an exquisite piece to it's last verse.
PumpkinPie-xox- |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 03:18:15 AM AEST
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| This is very descriptive and it adds such an inspirational and Biblical touch... well done! |
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Re: A lovely kiss
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:01:12 PM AEST
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| Venkat, this is beautiful. I loved it. *S* Cynthia |
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