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No Place To Hide
Contributed by
sean_kent2003
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 05:12:11 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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No Place To Hide
I look in the mirror,don't know what I expect to see.All that is there is a reflection of me.Pain,Sorrow,The fear inside,I run from myself but theres no place to hide.Darkness dwells at everdays end, like the madness inside, lurking within. I tried to find happiness, I looked all around, I even went as far as 6 feet underground. I stepped on over to the other side,Still trying to run,But theres no place to hide.
Sean Kent-12/22/99-
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2004-03-17 05:12:11]
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Re: No Place To Hide
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by Pompous on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:53:04 AM AEST
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very dark 'like the madness inside, lurking within' I love that line...very well written
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Re: No Place To Hide
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:29:39 PM AEST
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Hey Sean, welcome to YPDC.
This did have a madness quality to it and struggling to hold on. I liked it.
Kie |
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