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Tired
Contributed by
Jackee_line
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:06:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I'm so tired
I just want to sleep,
get away from all this kaos.
I want it to stop.
But.....
I can't even do that,
I don't deserve it.
I don't deserve peace,
not in sleep
not even in death.
I'm so tired
I just want to sleep
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2004-03-17 10:06:22]
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Re: Tired
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by doug on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:12:20 AM AEST
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i can definitely identify with this poem , short but enjoyable to read none the less.
take care , your friend doug |
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Re: Tired
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:46:12 AM AEST
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I know how you feel love, beleive me, too much going on, mind buzzing, we all deserve a bit of peace and when you've figured out how to get some give me a PM and let me know lol
Good poem, I can truly relate.
Ali xx |
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Re: Tired
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:40:07 AM AEST
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| I have been there soooooooooo many times. Body exhausted, mind desolate and sleeping forever sounds unattainable. Thank you for sharing this poem, I enjoyed reading it. Kie |
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Re: Tired
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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| feels like a four in the morning state of depression - i like |
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Re: Tired
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:38:43 PM AEST
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wow i know how that feels.. good poem..
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