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Wind
Contributed by
kayald
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Swallow up the wind
Taste the sunny air
Feel the gentle breeze
Run his fingers through your hair
Tell him of your secrets
With every gust he sends
He will remain a constant
Your forever imaginary friend
A gentle summer breeze
Can cool the hottest coast,
But watch the might he holds
When his power he starts to boast
His reign of terror
Can chill you to the bone
As it shakes the shutters loose
And makes the night air moan
Calm yourself, oh wind!
Cease your endless roar
Your blows only injure those
Who want your breath no more
What happened to the friend
That I loved that long ago day?
You, yourself, oh wind,
Have blown my friend away.
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-03-17 10:11:18]
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Re: Wind
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by doug on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:14:38 AM AEST
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| quite enjoyable to read, i hate it when the wind blows hard. anyways take care , your friend doug |
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Re: Wind
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:37:19 AM AEST
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Really good, well done. I hate the wind, Mother Nature has a lot to answer for lol
Ali xx |
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Re: Wind
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by Alli on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:31:09 AM AEST
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| Very beautifully written. |
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Re: Wind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:03:00 PM AEST
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I know how disapointment in a friend can cut like a gust of wind. i like your choice of words here |
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