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The Tempest (sonnet)
Contributed by
springchic1979
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 02:25:56 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Emotions enrage; so I stain this page
With ink bleeding my thoughts blacker than night--
I make oceans rage, have their waves engage
The shores with all my fury and might
'Til each grain of sand obeys my command
And the four winds howl in sheer agony.
This thought composed land shall never withstand
The true viciousness of my tyranny.
The blinding white rays of my piercing gaze
Splinter celestial layers above Earth.
I relish the ways roaring fires blaze
And life attempts escape for all its worth;
But there's no shelter from such intense storms...
Nor from my emotions when they take forms.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright 2004 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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2004-03-17 14:25:56]
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Re: The Tempest (sonnet)
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:01:25 PM AEST
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Such rage lol.
great write. :) |
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Re: The Tempest (sonnet)
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:11:35 PM AEST
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Exquisitly composed rhyme. You, my dear, are a poet. One thing: I would change last two lines to: " worth.(period after worth) Then:
There's scant shelter for an intense storm....
Nor for my emotions when they take form.
(because, don't you think the double plurel--"emotions and forms" need changed?)
Never-the-less, I'm impressed. |
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Re: The Tempest (sonnet)
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 03:26:14 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love this poem- it seems as you are describing me |
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