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Why Not? Why For?
Contributed by
crying-crimson-tears
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 04:56:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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beating,beating.
this life pounds through
breathing
living.
living is dying.
dying, you're dead.
wait!
not yet!
breathing is life.
life?
not really.
why not?
why for?
death is life
for
life is death
dwelling underground
or walking earth
cut your wrists
and drink your blood
shards of cloth
wrap your
self inflicted wounds
decaying
decaying
your flesh is rotting.
rotting.
breathing.
dying.
fading.
living.
flesh is a cover
of feelings
darkened feelings,
feelings,
thoughts
beneath
our eyes
beneath
our hearts
dying slowly
living fastly.
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2004-03-17 16:56:43]
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Re: Why Not? Why For?
(User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:20:19 PM AEST
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The first thing that comes to me is that it is really scattered, all over the place, and yet it works really well. The way you wrote this shows an inner turmoil that you were able to express very well. Great write.
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