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his girl doesn't know?
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 06:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The way i feel his chest beat faster
As the urge for one more time grows
He knows he shouldn't it's not fair
Does it matter, his girl doesn't know?
His touch seems to excite my body
His mouth seems to caress my lips
I know I should not encourage
Or hers is to be the heart to rip
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Re: his girl doesn't know?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 06:46:13 PM AEST
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This is quite a unique take on cheating as it is written from the perspective of the person who is 'the other woman'.
It is very interesting and I like the flow of it.
I look forward to reading the finished poem.
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Re: his girl doesn't know?
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 08:51:22 PM AEST
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nice poem i'm really interested in reading it again when it's finished
*maybe it's just me, but i blamed the guy who kind of cheated on me, i could not blame his other girl, cause hey he was the one who didn't stay faithfull |
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Re: his girl doesn't know?
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 09:41:48 PM AEST
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I felt so unloved unwanted and hated, to be cheated on, I was never to see that lover again and I didn't want to, lies and obsession kept usapart and how I felt to get my heart ripped out.
-Victoria-
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Re: his girl doesn't know?
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by Juggalette_carebear on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:18:32 PM AEST
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OMG!?!? exactly what I felt yesterday. I like this guy who has a g/f and we were talkin in his room and I was wondering those same thoughts.Even though we ended kissing and stuff I felt really bad after it. I wonder if hes mad at me.. Oh well u cant change the past. good luck on finishing it ~Sam~
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Re: his girl doesn't know?
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:33:35 PM AEST
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Oh what a poem! An interesting point of view. Keep writing! It had caught my interest!
Anne ;) |
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Re: his girl doesn't know?
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:15:21 PM AEST
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| Interesting, one hopes that you havent been doing anything, because one might have to have words with one, interesting write though i like the perspective look Luke |
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