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Needs and Wants
Contributed by
perfection
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 10:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You cut and slash
Leave another gash.
You bleed and bleed
Pain is what you need.
You will eventually die
Everyone will know about your secret lie.
I need to see blood coming from me.
I need to hide the scars so no one can see.
I want to die while holding a blade.
I want to hide the pain I have made.
You want to live in bliss
And get your first kiss.
You want to stop
But instead you chop.
You cry and cry
But continue to keep your secret lie.
I need to see blood coming from me.
I need to hide the scars so no one can see.
I want to die while holding a blade.
I want to hide the pain I have made.
You love Guard
Even when it’s hard.
You used to never eat
Because you love the feeling of defeat.
You let out a big sigh
Because you know you can no longer live this secret lie.
I need to see blood coming from me.
I need to hide the scars so no one can see.
I want to die while holding a blade.
I want to hide the pain I have made.
I want to die ASAP.
Look there is blood coming from me.
March 17, 2004
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Re: Needs and Wants
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:18:27 PM AEST
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it is so sad when someone can not see the beauty they hold within and wants to hurt themselves or end this gift of life...since that will not end their struggle but only prolong it...we all hold such power of beauty within us if we just choose to let it shine
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Re: Needs and Wants
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by kayald on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:37:11 PM AEST
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| wow hun this is an awesome write that ive never read before it is so deep and sad...i hurt just reading it....love ya hun, keep it up... |
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Re: Needs and Wants
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:28:12 AM AEST
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I'll Have To Agree With Kayald
This is a A~W~E~S~O~M~E Write
So Deep~so sad .....
I Just Hade A Friend To Take Her Own Life
I Posted A Poem About Her Suicide Note
She Had Written To Me If You Would
Like To Read It...It's Called My Friends
Suicide Note....Your'll Find It On Another Page On Here..
This Just Killed My Soul Reading This.........
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Needs and Wants
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:19:15 AM AEST
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very good poem sounds like me. I liked it a lot and could relate to it so much it hurt.
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