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The Perfect
Contributed by
perfection
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Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:04:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The perfect weight
The perfect height
The perfect little girl.
The perfect face
The perfect chase
The perfect little fight.
The perfect chance
The perfect glance
The perfect little moment.
The perfect life
The perfect knife
The perfect little death.
March 4, 2004
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Re: The Perfect
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:14:03 PM AEST
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actually what needs to be perfect is what we hold within ...the beauty that come from the soul is what matters and can change an entire outside appearance
Shari |
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Re: The Perfect
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by lapse on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:41:25 PM AEST
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| the first emotional and physical tingle i have felt in a long time. it cuts my soul for a few seconds.....intoxicating |
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Re: The Perfect
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by Randibee85 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:58:41 PM AEST
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Do you have an eating disorder? This is the 1st of your poems I read and it sounds like it.... Read some of mine if you do.
Poodles,
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Re: The Perfect
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by Randibee85 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:59:16 PM AEST
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| By the way... I loved reading this. It's wonderful. |
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Re: The Perfect
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 06:05:19 PM AEST
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| You know, I am a perfectionist as well, but I know there are nothing I can do to change my appearance, so instead I always concerntrate on perfecting my inner self, and trust me, to have a perfect heart is better than to have a perfect looks! And, by the way, this is a perfect little poem!^_^ |
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