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committed or not:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:46:44 PM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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If i gave you a ring,
am not committed.
if i gave you chain ,
am not committed.
if i gave you a house,
am not committed.
even if i gave you a business,
am not committed.
if i gave you a car ,
am not committed.
if i gave you a boat,
am not committed.
if i take you on trips,
am not committed.
even if i promise you the world,
am not committed.
now if i gave you my word i am committed,
because my word comes from the abundance of the heart(soul)
do you gets what i am saying here?
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-03-17 23:46:44]
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Re: committed or not:
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:42:26 AM AEST
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| Yes I do! Great write! Christina |
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Re: committed or not:
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by Remy on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:31:41 PM AEST
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i get it now... simplisticly redundant, and yet catchy... groovy write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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