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Cigarettes and Love
Contributed by
outdoorsman
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 11:58:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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drifting like smoke
rising and falling with the wind
inhaled and exhale
blow out your fears
this smoke is love
the form of a cloud
is emotion
sent here and there
riding tides of what matters
only for the cloud
breath deeply and hold it in
but it only lasts a short time
soon you will run out of breath
and you'll look for a new brand
to light up and burn down
Cigarettes and love
these two addictions
can be hazardous to your health
Copyright ©
outdoorsman
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2004-03-17 23:58:34]
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Re: Cigarettes and Love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:02:55 AM AEST
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Good analogy...I liked this a lot...
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Re: Cigarettes and Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:37:12 AM AEST
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too true.
both equally as dangerous.
good one. |
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Re: Cigarettes and Love
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by elizabethfusco on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:16:14 PM AEST
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Awesome poem.
I guess it's good that I smoke a pack a day but avoid love like the plague ;) |
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