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i am a warrior
Contributed by
maha_ak49
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:48:15 AM in AEST
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i am a warrior,
i see no barrier,
i must be a terrier,
for something much better,
i do exist,
i need no assist,
i will leap for the best,
not just a hissing pest,
few words,
shuffled me like cards,
my dear lads,
i will be one of the lords.
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Re: i am a warrior
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by Standing_alone on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 11:42:15 AM AEST
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This poem shows lots of confidence in yourself, which is very good to have, yet at the same time, you dont want to get cocky. The line
"i need no assist," well I hate to bust your bubble, but everyone need some assist at some point and time in their life, and no matter how independent we are, we have to learn that we need to know when to ask for help when we are over our heads.
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