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The End of My Rainbow
Contributed by
putteragain
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:42:05 AM in AEST
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Whats at the end of your rainbow
a pot O' gold secrets untold
Could ther be a leprechaun
hiding from the masses behind sunglasses
Or waiting patiently your PrincePrincess
with soft waiting lips or fashion tips
Whats at the end of your rainbow
a giant bag of skittles or kitten vittles
Maybe just maybe what you will find
a big oak tree or your fantasy
at the end of my rainbow i think
is a daisie field and poppies pink
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Re: The End of My Rainbow
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:27:43 PM AEST
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This poem was dreamy and had a fairy tale quality to it which I absolutely LOVE! The last two lines--"at the end of my rainbow i think
is a daisie field and poppies pink"
I could see that field in my mind. Seeing words come to life is what makes for great poetry.
Well done. Kie
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Re: The End of My Rainbow
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 12:42:22 PM AEST
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Oh what an interesting short poem :) Its realyl great with a tinge of fantasy great write! Liked it a lot!
Anne :D |
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Re: The End of My Rainbow
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:10:11 PM AEST
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Awww hehe I loved it!
Very well done
Roses
Larry :o) |
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Re: The End of My Rainbow
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, humorous it may be but with a subject with a serious twist. What's at the ends of rainbows... the answers to our dreams. Alas my rainbow dodges my vision, its end forever clouded in shadows unseen. But thanks for that view of daisies and poppy fields. Great dreams you have and great skills with poetry too. |
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Re: The End of My Rainbow
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:39:15 PM AEST
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This made me smile. Love ALL the bright colors!
Stitch |
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