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Letter to god
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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They pick on me...
Taunt me, tease me
... hurt me
...I cry...
I break down, just ..fall to the floor
Head clasped in the corner..
.. i Scream
Raping me..
I can feel myself dying
Can feel it just pulling away
..Sliding down...
Im left here with nothing
..Nothing to live for
Its not easy to hide.. all these feelings inside
..Ugly
Watching this knife,
.. Rip out my heart
Watching them devour it..
Blood dripping down their chin
...Bastards..
Im left here with nothing..
...Nothing to live for
Im cradled here lock in my head..
..Silence..
Its killing me...
Im left here with nothing..
...Nothing to live for....
JUST LISTEN TO ME
I HATE THEM
I WANT THEM TO DIE
GOD JUST KILL ME!!!!!!
pl..ease ..god..please.... just kill me.....
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2004-03-18 13:09:32]
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Re: Letter to god
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:12:05 PM AEST
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such despaire expressed here
sending you big hugs
((((((((((foreverlonely)))))))))
michelle |
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Re: Letter to god
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:15:19 PM AEST
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Oh what a sad bitter poem! And I tought I'd read some light poem. This poem screamed in my head how much hate and bitterness this person hold towards life. Its truely amazing how you wrote it. It squeezed my heart. Amazing poem as usual keep it up ;)
Anne :d |
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Re: Letter to god
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:15:22 PM AEST
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Wow! What power! Your torment jumps from the page and into the readers soul.
I hope it's simply poetic ravings and not a reality.
Very well done my friend
Larry |
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Re: Letter to god
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by Dark_Mistress on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:22:38 PM AEST
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aww, sugar...things'll get better~ in the meantime, learn some self defence or something so you can kick their butts.
I really like your poem because I went through something similar when I was younger. Hearing all of the pain and anger and despair behind your words, there is no doubt in my mind that you've actually experienced this. |
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Re: Letter to god
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by discantbelife on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:47:23 PM AEST
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| wonderful i can just remeber feeling like this one time or another in my life... ugh amazing if i say so my self |
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Re: Letter to god
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:42:51 PM AEST
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| very sadly vivid luke, im always here for you, huggies n' love nessa |
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Re: Letter to god
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by fallen_eyes on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST
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Luke this poem has such immense feelings its incrediable. i really hope you dont feel like this and if so please please talk to me you know i am always here for you. The poem really jumps off the page and wraps itself around the reader, the room goes cold and their spine will shake, you really do express the emotion so well that the poem does come to life for the split second it is being read. Its an amzing write
luv always Pickle xxx |
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