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To Thee O Sweet Angel.
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:42:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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To thee O sweet angel,
I give my total obesience,
upon thy lovely mantel,
I place my soul's license.
To thee,
the treasures of this earth,
thy hair,
that flows as precious silk,
thy skin,
as smooth as ivory tips,
thine eyes,
as green as emerald deeps,
thy lips,
arrayed with rubies red,
these jewels
adorn thy peerless grace.
To thee,
the thresholds of heaven,
the stars,
I did pluck to adorn,
thy face,
of consumate perfection,
thy grace,
eclipses the moon,
the skies,
are but reflections,
thy beauty,
that even angels long.
To thee,
the pleasures of this world,
thy touch,
that brims with sumptous delights,
thy voice,
that brings shudders to my soul,
thy looks
that brings tremors to my heart,
thy kiss,
the tender stirrings of lust,
thy love,
sweet answers to dreams.
To thee my sweet angel,
upon this delicate gentle rhyme,
I deliver this precious parcel,
this tender love I have for thine.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-03-18 13:42:03]
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Re: To Thee O Sweet Angel.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 02:06:32 PM AEST
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It works for me, but then I am a bit sappy romantic at heart. Beautifully written.
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Re: To Thee O Sweet Angel.
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by Kie on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:53:53 PM AEST
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*Raises hand*
Yes this works for me as well. I think alot of women are emotional and deep and of course somewhat sappy but in a good way. Anyway....
This is the kind of poem you send with flowers, or recite under a window, dang it is just so sweet, romantic & tender.
*Stabs orange in frustration*
Yes every guy should write poems like this and give them to his girl.
I think this is delightful and very sweet.
Well done.
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Re: To Thee O Sweet Angel.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 04:42:00 PM AEST
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Really romantic, Hawk.... which woman in her right mind wouldn't enjoy getting this...
I know I wouldn't...but then..I'm not of sound mind!! :>)
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Re: To Thee O Sweet Angel.
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:41:39 PM AEST
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A Wonderful gathering of words.
Whisper
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Re: To Thee O Sweet Angel.
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:51:40 PM AEST
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| Wow, beautiful and romantic .. I loved this ... Jan |
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