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My Dear Friend
Contributed by
lostinlimbo
on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:48:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The gleaming blur
Freedom has arrived
Just a bit more hurt
In the form a knife
So sharp and uncaring
Very much like my love
And deeply penetrating
No heavens up above
None for me
I'm not so blind
No one for me
Not a soul to find
So the end has come
And I smile in my pain
Because when I'm done
I won't hurt again
I give myself to you
My dear friend
For the blade loves me
Until the end
Copyright ©
lostinlimbo
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2004-03-18 13:48:27]
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Re: My Dear Friend
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by Remy on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 01:54:27 PM AEST
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oi pa, no going back with friends such as this! but the feeling is understood... oi, wow, good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: My Dear Friend
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 03:12:41 PM AEST
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| i don't understand this much... |
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Re: My Dear Friend
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:20:43 PM AEST
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i liked this poem keep up the good work and I understand perfectly what you wrote.
-Victoria- |
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Re: My Dear Friend
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:41:23 PM AEST
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| Good write. I loved the last two lines. Good job! |
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