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¤ Night Sky ¤
Contributed by
monkey
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Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 10:56:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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the night sky
like
constantly glowing
lightning bugs
is always
lit
I dream
of laying;
forever,
under the sparkling
sky
the opal moon
sheds its light
across the
small country
I drift to sleep
eventually
staring up
at the mysterious
night lights
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Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-03-18 22:56:21]
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Re: ¤ Night Sky ¤
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:23:20 PM AEST
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lovely imagery
Shari |
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Re: ¤ Night Sky ¤
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 11:37:38 PM AEST
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| how serene |
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Re: ¤ Night Sky ¤
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:46:01 AM AEST
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Oh its so peaceful! even the way you wrote it :D makes me feel dreamy. Very well written loved it!
Anne :D |
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Re: ¤ Night Sky ¤
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:10:57 PM AEST
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So very soothing and great mental images. Please, keep looking at the stars ;o)
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: ¤ Night Sky ¤
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:15:05 PM AEST
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| mmmm..... sound so peaceful....... I like watching stars as well, but the night sky of England sucks most of the times, can hardly see any.... oh well....... since I can't see the real thing, your poem should do the trick...^_^ |
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