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Healers Scars
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:09:08 AM in AEST
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Before you try to save me
Please save yourself
Now I know you hate
To see pain screaming
Just the way your pain does
I understand wanting to help
Because that's how I am too
Empathy hurts the worst
As you feel the pain too
Just relax and stop fighting
No need to get upset
When I question or play
To help another requires
Honesty and trust both ways
When you try to help the hurt
You are always dealing with
A hurt, cornered and scared animal
So you must expect them to bite
Look at the scars I wear
Each one from helping another
All you can do is clench your teeth
And bear the pain felt
Those meant to fly high on wings
Deserve to have them unclipped
They shouldn't be caged unwillingly
You can't obtain them
Unless they come freely
Just remember that
Healing hands are scarred
Raven's Sin
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Cobalt
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Re: Healers Scars
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by Remy on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:16:09 AM AEST
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ooo... i love the images conveyed here, it's an awesome write!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:22:37 AM AEST
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Interesting write... and so true. Though I had to read it about 3 times to fully get what you were saying. I think I'm just lacking concentration. lol. Could it BE because I'm talking to you at the same time I'm reading this?? lol :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:02:17 AM AEST
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| well done..there are very good lines. venkat |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:28:11 AM AEST
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| I love this..... it's very inspirational.... thanks. |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:34:31 AM AEST
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"Just remember that
Healing hands are scarred"
Gosh! Its so deep. Wow I loved this poem! Very thoughtful poem the ending is brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this one, (re-read it more than once to say the truth :p). Great write keep it comin!
Anne :D |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:43:03 AM AEST
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Good write, Cobalt.... Wise words.....
Jenni |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:47:47 AM AEST
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A~W~E~S~O~M~E~
W~R~I~T~E~
Loved It..
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by Kie on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:23:27 PM AEST
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| I have a lot of thoughts pertaining to this poem but I don't know how to put them into words. Very powerful and clear. A well constructed poem. Kie |
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Re: Healers Scars
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:21:11 PM AEST
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| oh i like this one............ |
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