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Fading Light
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 01:16:03 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Fading Light Too much times elapses to light The new passage of a different lighted bliss Time knows when things will end or commence The next day is a waiting new chance Don't let time fade away the waiting light For sooner than you think it will soon die The flames of life slowly die down There will be nothing at all at dawn It all drowns in the sorrows not gone The high sun above unable to evaporate The feelings that are dying inside of me One more days passes as the light fades The chances I've taken worthless in the end The light fades to a nonexistant being I've lost the sight of my way in this life The bliss slowly starts to turn darker Nothing pure can stay that way longer It ends to become something darker The light fades as the world spins Nothing suffices to make bliss once again Too much time has elapsed for that to happen Once again the end is soon to come For the light fades to nonexistance
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Re: Fading Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 03:24:52 AM AEST (User
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Very powerful! Great job! |
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Re: Fading Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:36:11 AM AEST (User
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What a thoughtful powerful poem! Great write with vivid description!
Anne :D |
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Re: Fading Light
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:17:27 PM AEST (User
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Very good post here hun..I really liked finding this one. |
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