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Closed Up.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 04:14:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Deep within me,
i hurt so much,
thoughts drain me,
into a lifeless touch!
idea's swamp me,
of how i could die,
self-harm grips me,
into my darker side.
closed visions hold me,
but some still get in,
to others, they won't see it,
but my hurtings wearing thin!
there's thousands of ways to do it,
but i need to find what's right for me,
because if i don't,
then i'll never be free!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-03-19 04:14:09]
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Re: Closed Up.
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:16:10 AM AEST
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Wow very powerful write. Hope you find your way and finally be free ;) KEep writing very well written poem!
Anne :D |
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Re: Closed Up.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:14:05 AM AEST
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Deeply moving...hope you feel better soon..
Jenni |
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Re: Closed Up.
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by secretwind on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:12:10 AM AEST
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| Deep innervision....well done. |
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