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I Cease to See
Contributed by
liquidchaos
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Your professions of truth
Are too much to bear
Break down the front--
these facades that we wear.
You delivered your faith
Just as I asked
For once didn't judge me
For my sinful past.
The times that we shared
Shaped my world for all time.
You were my all
My partner in crime.
You said that you loved me
For all that I am
Then you walked away
Said "I don't understand."
How can I explain
My actions? My thoughts?
You left me here broken--
Love comes with a cost.
Deep down inside,
I know you don't care.
But who else can rescue
Me from this dispair?
I try to discard
Shattered promises of yesterday.
To trade them for hope
Dreams to pave my way.
But I can't leave the past in the past--
Can't move on
Scream my lungs out to reach you
But I know that you're gone.
So I touch these scars
With trembling fingers.
Wishing for courage to end this hurt that lingers.
And I drag the merciful blade accross my skin.
Drawing out this misery that lies within.
Enveloping cold surrounds my thoughts.
Numbness consumes me.
Once again I cease to see.
Copyright ©
liquidchaos
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2004-03-19 12:29:22]
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Re: I Cease to See
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by Necromant on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:37:36 PM AEST
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So much sadness and bitterness. The poems is a real heart squezeer! Very well written! Keep it up! And be strong ;)
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Re: I Cease to See
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by arden on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 12:37:11 PM AEST
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agrees with comment above. well written, i really like this poem alot. good work keep it up.
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Re: I Cease to See
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by Angelica on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 01:30:16 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was a very well written poem. Very sad, but I can relate to the feeling. Good job! :) |
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