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My love
Contributed by
martynman1
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 04:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My lips meet yours,
and for a moment there is just you,
And as the world around us fades,
A first kiss but a forever memory.
Come lay beside me,
Let me rest your head,
On my chest listen to my heartbeat.
My arms gently holding you,
Till morning light stirs us awake.
The only way to live today,
Is to give to those who love,
This way you will always be safe in love,
In you theres love so i will give,
All my love to you.
Copyright ©
martynman1
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2004-03-19 16:16:25]
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Re: My love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:23:10 AM AEST
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Hey I like your stuff, heartfelt indeed
If you don't mind my critique tho...I think the word love is mentioned too many times in the last verse, otherwise love it!
Kell x |
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