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SKITZ
Contributed by
Rhei76
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:15:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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IT'S ONE, BASIC TWO, CHANGING ON A FRONT JUST TO LET YOU KNOW. I AM THREE, BESIDE MYSELF. OFF WITH BOOTS UNTIED.
LOVER USE, USED LOVER OVER AGAIN.
DIRTY SHEETS, HEAD BEATING LIKE A DRUM. MUST OF REALLY HAD SOME FUN!
BUT, WHICH ONE?
I AM TWO, INESSENSE TAKING THREE THRU THIRD EYE VIEW, I AM LIKE YOU UNCONCIOUSLY AMUSED. PAST THE POINT OF LIABLITY. INTO THE SPIRAL
WHERE IT'S NO ONE ELSE JUST ONE IN PLURAL THREE. IT'S ME
Copyright ©
Rhei76
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2004-03-19 17:15:29]
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Re: SKITZ
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by Nate on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 05:20:09 PM AEST
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| schitzophrenia how many of ya got it. . .. . .i like it. .. . |
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Re: SKITZ
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by Kie on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 06:51:53 PM AEST
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| This was deep, interesting and the first poem i've seen written like this. Quite unique. Kie |
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Re: SKITZ
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST
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pretty cool. i like the first line. really interesting 2 read
xxxxx |
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