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Falling In Your Spell
Contributed by
MyLastBreath
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Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 07:53:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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When I look into your eyes
Everything just disappears
Because of this moment
I'll be lost forever
Because of your smile
I've surrendered to this sweet reverie
I want to taste your beauty
And embrace your innocence
It's just a dream
A dream without a touch
I'm left lingering in your perfection
And I'm left alone
I've been cursed
With falling into your spell
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MyLastBreath
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2004-03-19 19:53:19]
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Re: Falling In Your Spell
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by Kie on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 11:02:25 PM AEST
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Yes i've been cursed before, totally enthralled. This was a really good poem. Its obvious you have alot of talent. I enjoyed this so much and i'm glad you shared it with us.
Hey----Welcome to YPDC.. I hope you like it here. I look forward to your next submission. Kie |
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Re: Falling In Your Spell
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:56:44 AM AEST
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VEry well written poem!! I ejoyed reading it! Agree falling in love is sometimes a curse! Keep writing! (Welcome to the Y.P.D.C!)
Anne :D |
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Re: Falling In Your Spell
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:52:39 PM AEST
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a beautiful expression of emotion,
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Falling In Your Spell
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:19:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful Loved It
Great Write..And Welcome To Y.P.D.C.
I've Not Been Here Long But I Can Tell
You All These People Are Absolutely Very Nice.
This Is An Awesome Poem Site That I've Been To Lately..
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Falling In Your Spell
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:13:57 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing its a intrigueing when you think about what a person can make you do and make you feel. youve captured it quite well |
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