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Pit of Despair
Contributed by
stalkee
on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 10:17:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can't look in the mirror
I can't take what I see,
standing infront of me
I'm rotting on the inside
And I've turned into a creature full of enmity
I see a blaze of fire in my eyes
And a cloud of darkness on my mind
I once was so happy and free
But now I'm depressed and sad...
I always look at the world
Head up high and smiling
But I'm just a liar
'Cause a part of me dies everyday
I'm losing my mind
My words are fading,
and becoming pointless
I never knew...who I thought I knew
And now I'm lonely...
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2004-03-19 22:17:39]
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Re: Pit of Despair
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 01:46:50 AM AEST
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| Very emotional and very very sad. |
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Re: Pit of Despair
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by Letting_Go on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:59:38 AM AEST
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| Whoah totally shocking...in a good way. Mostly what you have written here when you were depressed is what is engraved in my ownself now for what has seemed like ages. Magnificent poem, especially for those who know what you are saying and been there themselves. |
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Re: Pit of Despair
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by arden on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 12:15:57 AM AEST
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so so sad and full of emotion. great write. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Pit of Despair
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by SAT on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:09:47 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem. One of your good ones. i think that whatever inspired you should never die. Your poems are really good, and whatever the cause of this expression... keep it up!
sincerely
~*Alicia Marie*~ |
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