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World Of Lies
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:48:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Id slit the neck of the Mona Lisa
To see her smile grimace in pain
Id gouge out the eyes of humanity
And watch it bleed to death
This is the final farewell
To the world of lies
This is the final curtain
To this world of lies
Id spray acid into a bishops eyes
And in blind faith, he bows to me
Id tear apart the Virgins womb
And watch her bleed her lies
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2004-03-20 10:48:56]
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Re: World Of Lies
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 11:24:25 AM AEST
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Geeze I don't want to be near you now bhehehe. Wow very violent poem. A true dark one!
Anne :) |
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Re: World Of Lies
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 12:44:00 PM AEST
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| Holly crap!!! That was pretty dark!!! I liked it though. Great job, I look forward to reading more from you! |
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Re: World Of Lies
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:37:30 PM AEST
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| This comment is nothing more than a notice of appreciation of your vitriol. I like vitriol in poetry . . . . |
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