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silent story of the lost one
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 02:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cry of the raven endulging the forest
Tonight she is living through soulless and dead
Searching the twilight and searching the shadows
Tonight she will prey on the innocents bed
Under the moonlight she seeks the forbidden
The beautiful ugliness slowly draws near
Wrapped in the highly wrougt silver of sadness
With me as her servant through purpose and fear
I was her victim, now I bear her concience
I gave my promise, now she is my God
I am the dark elf who rests on her shoulder
Tearing your heart with the tip of my rod
Eyes of conviction are reading the silence
Her footprints are staining the landscape with fright
Without permission I silently hate her
Unseen she is reaping new souls from this night
I was the first to be marked by her craving
She needs my pure soul to be gaining her will
Seeking immortals to rule in the shadows
My tears are surpressed as I follow her still
I was her victim, now I bear her concience
I gave my promise, now she is my God
I am the dark elf who rests on her shoulder
Tearing your heart with the tip of my rod
So I believe that there will be tomorrow
A day to ensure that her path is still red
Silent the voice of this dark elf is shouting
Tonight we will prey on the innocents bed
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Re: silent story of the lost one
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:23:07 PM AEST
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Wow Loved this poem! Great write as well full of dark fantasy. Keep writing!
Anne :D |
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Re: silent story of the lost one
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 06:36:44 PM AEST
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| Bravo! You put alot of work into this poem and wow does it show. Excellent write. Kie |
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Re: silent story of the lost one
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:57:45 AM AEST
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| good job on the poem .i like it alot :) |
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Re: silent story of the lost one
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by Pwei on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 08:35:39 AM AEST
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Hi there,
This is absorbing. I love the imagery....I dont know what else to say...mwah!
MARK |
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