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When I first saw you
Contributed by
jLo
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:45:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When i first saw you
i already knew that right then and there
i was in love with you
as the days past
as time went on i knew my love for you would never be gone
i tried to confess my love to you
a love that was so true,
but you told me you didn't know me
and that i couldn't be with you
i told you i'd wait forever
forever if i must
to show you that my love for you
was never just lust.
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jLo
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2004-03-20 15:45:31]
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Re: When I first saw you
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by justjames on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:53:41 PM AEST
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| wow, this is great, it really speaks to me and is kinda like the situation i'm going through, i write about it in my poems check them out |
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Re: When I first saw you
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 03:55:22 PM AEST
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Oh you're really burned! Best wishes! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: When I first saw you
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 04:12:29 PM AEST
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| Ah.. the first stirrings of love.. always nice...good write. |
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