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Puppet Master
Contributed by
apollo
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:22:10 PM in AEST
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The Puppets made of nylon which give outlook
to my uncontrolled state of being.
The evil which takes no prisoners
shows no remorse as to killing off my character.
For you I hang my reason to live out to dry;
I am sorry if I have let you down.
Proceed to take control of my illness;
as these tears of my eyes do not tear anymore.
As this robot has been given life.
Copyright ©
apollo
... [
2004-03-20 20:22:10]
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Re: Puppet Master
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:29:59 PM AEST
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| Tomorrow comes and with it new hope...Russ |
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Re: Puppet Master
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 08:38:11 PM AEST
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i agree with russ ...tomorrow comes and what seem to be insurmountable today sorts itself out and you are free of its hold
Shari |
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Re: Puppet Master
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:00:48 AM AEST
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I like the last line. It is very powerful and does the piece justice overall.
Keepwriting. |
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