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A Fleeting Dream
Contributed by
MrWrite
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Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:22:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I used to think that people cared,
but that is just a memory
of feelings wrought and feelings shared.
The way things were supposed to be.
I want to set off on my own,
to truly find my destiny,
but I feel like I am all alone,
unable to find the real me.
My life is not as it seems,
my entire mind is filled with doubt.
Fleeting glimpses of hopes and dreams
that some wish I could do without.
I want to reap what I can sow,
but I am told what I must be.
It doesn't matter to them that I want to grow,
they care only that I "succeed".
I truly wish to be set free.
I want to die, so it shall be.
Copyright ©
MrWrite
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2004-03-20 22:22:07]
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Re: A Fleeting Dream
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:34:03 PM AEST
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| Wow, what a wonderfully emotional poem. I really enjoyed it. It flowed very well and sent it's message quite clearly. I absolutely loved it. Great job, keep up the great work! |
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Re: A Fleeting Dream
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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| I thought this was deeply sad and filled with alot of hurt and wanting to be accepted for who you are. I could be wrong, I dunno. I liked it alot nonetheless. Kie |
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Re: A Fleeting Dream
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 12:52:06 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was a very inspiring write, full of emotion and quiet desperation and sadness. Well done. |
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Re: A Fleeting Dream
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by Pompous on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:52:41 AM AEST
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this is an amazing poem, I can relate to it a lot...well written, well done
...Neal... |
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Re: A Fleeting Dream
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:19:47 AM AEST
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I really can relate to this one! Amazing poem! Loved it! Hope you're still with the living bhehehe Great write!
Anne :D |
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