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I can't love you
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:38:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Would you hold me tight
let me know it'll be alright.
Let's light us a candle
and watch it slow burn.
Now I may never
love you in my lifetime
but let's not waste right now.
For now heaven can wait
while you're in my arms.
Theres nothing left to say
on this cold December night.
I may want you baby,
and I may need you lovely,
but I'm never gonna love you.
Now I may never love you, no.
Theres only one woman
that I've ever loved in my life.
She left me cold and crying
one dark and stormy night.
She kissed me gently and
held me tightly one last time.
Said goodbye and packed her suitcase
then she walked right out of my life.
Baby please don't shed a tear
and please don't be sad.
Now I may want you,
and I may need you,
but theres no way that
I'm ever gonna love you.
Baby I'm sorry that I
can't lie to stop your tears.
Nothing will ever change my
mind or the way that I feel.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-21 02:38:15]
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Re: I can't love you
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:49:31 AM AEST
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ahh dude I get where yer coming from so clearly... a beautiful poem shows your inner self so clearly... I loved it man.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I can't love you
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 02:57:03 AM AEST
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| fantastic. sad but true in many ways. muy interesante |
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Re: I can't love you
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:07:02 AM AEST
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| This breaks my heart...and I know the feeling but from the other perspective...a beautiful write. I've always thought a poet should make people feel...and you always do that...always. |
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Re: I can't love you
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 06:07:13 AM AEST
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*wistful sigh* Your poems always get me so wrapped up in the emotions within them. I know this feeling, and if I were a liar I'd tell you you'll love again one day and blah blah blah all that mushy crap. But what the hell do I know? I won't promise you nothing, as I never make a promise I can't keep. But I'll read your poems and leave comments and be the cool person I am who everybody loves. lol. (I am, however, a mite sarcastic at times... only at times... hehe)
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I can't love you
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:51:59 AM AEST
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Oh what a poem! Its so bitter! It really made me sad! You really know how to make me feel terrible! ........ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!! How can you be so expressive? How can you write with such mastery? How dare you write such a wonderful poem filled with raw emotion?! (Oh well thats what really talented poets do *sigh*)
Don't worry I'll just search for a humorous poem.
P.s. I love meatloaf as well ;)
Anne (no smilie today because i'm still feeling devastated) |
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Re: I can't love you
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by keysersoze51 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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| Very interesting, I can really relate to these emotions. Just extremely well done |
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Re: I can't love you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 12:42:18 PM AEST
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"on this cold December night.
I may want you baby,
and I may need you lovely,
but I'm never gonna love you"
I like the directness of this poem....it may sting someone though.... nicely written.
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Re: I can't love you
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by Kie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:50:56 PM AEST
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| A very strong, clear and concise poem. I hope everything works out for you and I wish you the best. Kie |
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Re: I can't love you
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 06:48:45 PM AEST
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| you never stop amazing me...but thi spoem fit just right with the feeling that I had for an ex lover that I still love. So when are you going to publish a darn book! you can make millions! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: I can't love you
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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| This poem almost made me cry, yeah Meatloaf does some weird things to your head. Love::::Kirby |
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