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star
Contributed by
spider
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:09:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Wish upon a star
Thrust a dagger
through your heart
last dying dream to be,
what I am,
not what I seem
Copyright ©
spider
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2004-03-21 09:09:55]
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Re: star
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:11:58 AM AEST
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| no your right you should leave it how it was. i like this short and effective. |
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Re: star
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:00:53 AM AEST
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Oh short and to the point my fav type. reat write!!!
Anne :D |
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Re: star
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:00:57 AM AEST
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Oh short and to the point my fav type. Great write!!!
Anne :D |
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Re: star
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by silent on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:04:31 AM AEST
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| I think you were right about not increasing the length of the write. Simple and effective, nice.. |
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Re: star
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:01:42 PM AEST
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| you know, you should had wished something better with that wish of yours, life is too short to waste on worthless people.... |
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