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Find your way to me
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 10:41:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It's a coincidence,
How things have changed,
What's going on,
With me and u,
Are we friends,
Or are we enemies,
I felt a vibe between us,
At first,
But then it wen't away
I rest and feel funny,
Cause u ain't here,
To wipe away my,
Tears of sadness,
Or feel my pain,
I think about u,
Even when I go to sleep,
Dang,
What makes me hooked on u
When I hug u,
I hear your heart beat,
So calm,
It's like your eyes,
Tell me a story,
That I've never heard,
Before,
And it touches my heart,
Rebuilds my soul
You are an angel,
That watches my every move,
And me,
I can't keep my eyes off of u,
When your around me,
My heart beats so fast,
Making me feel,
So warm,
On the inside
Just the thought of u,
Won't make me sad,
But happy,
And when u stoled,
My heart,
I wanted u to keep it,
Today,
Tomorrow,
And forever
I can't stop dreaming of u,
Loving u,
Or caring about u,
Cause your a person,
I can always trust,
So the next time,
U need a friend,
Or someone to love,
Please find your way to me
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luckycharm
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Re: Find your way to me
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:01:41 AM AEST
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Beautiful inspireing poem! Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Find your way to me
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 12:02:28 PM AEST
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| lovely poem |
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Re: Find your way to me
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by silent on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 12:40:07 PM AEST
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| Simple yet drew me in. Very nice... |
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Re: Find your way to me
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by Whisper on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:04:21 AM AEST
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Nice I enjoyed that.
Whisper
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Re: Find your way to me
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by Chilibear on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:25:31 AM AEST
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Wow, Pam.... There's only one word i can think of to describe this poem....
BEAUTIFUL!
I love it .....
Love lotts,
Chilibear |
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Re: Find your way to me
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by Esther on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:18:14 AM AEST
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great right, the paragraphs flowed and the poem just pulls you in!
thanks for sharing it.
-Esther |
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