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RIP
Contributed by
perfection
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 01:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Oh lord please help me, is what I said.
As I walked in my room, My brother is dead!
I saw him hanging there, by a rope.
I just lost all sign of hope!
His skin was just as white as snow.
All that I could say was no!
I had a million things running though my mind.
He was always so hyper and so kind!
He is my older brother; I cant believe hes gone.
We can never again play catch on the lawn.
I always looked up to you, thought you were the best.
You prolly never knew that, you thought I was a pest.
I wish I could have just been able to say goodbye.
Now you are up there and here I lie.
Rest In Peace big brother!
Remember my love for you will last forever!
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2004-03-21 13:53:53]
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Re: RIP
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:36:32 AM AEST
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| omg this was so terribly touching & sad! I cried on this poem! Christina |
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Re: RIP
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:02:57 PM AEST
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| OMG, this is so sad. It truly touched me. Even though you didn't get the chance to meet him, he is watching over you. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: RIP
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by SugimotoYouki on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:36:36 AM AEST
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so sad ;-;
suicide is a hurtful thing...
I've, too lost many people through this...
I've never stopped thinking about their reasons, even blaming myself...
I just hope, that you'll feel better sometime..
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Re: RIP
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:05:14 AM AEST
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| that was sad... |
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