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Arrival of Spring
Contributed by
merry
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:20:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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coerced thinking
things might be different
nothing changes
the clouds roll in
bringing rain
I am cold
dreary end to winter
frozen mud
decaying debris
my dreams
scattered
lifeless forms
sigh escapes
on a breeze
the color of spring
appears on the horizon
glorious green
reminders
goodnight kisses
and promises
if I am willing
to listen to you
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-03-21 21:20:54]
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Re: Arrival of Spring
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:25:08 PM AEST
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I just drifted away on this one.....you always find a way to express yourself that gets inside me. Beautifully done
Roses
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Re: Arrival of Spring
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:21:17 PM AEST
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seasonal changes and changes of the soul, they do seem to run together, another amazingly beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Arrival of Spring
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:52:34 PM AEST
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Mmmmmm, nice stuff. Mud-puddle lucious. Who said that?
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