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Hourglass
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:35:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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tender unwitting
words fall at my feet
secondary thoughts
hungry emotions
elemental love
matches start fires
imploring kisses
distress in your eyes
caught unaware
wondering
why you and me
in black and white pictures
looking so young
without a care in the world
passing the test ot time
until now
brittle emotions
encounter resistence
cut the stings
attachments
undone
I want my freedom
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-03-21 21:35:04]
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Re: Hourglass
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 09:39:25 PM AEST
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I feel great sadness, yet a great resolve.
You will find your way .
((( Gaille)))
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: Hourglass
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:54:13 AM AEST
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| Stay strong ((Gaille)) ... an excellent write, as always ... with powerful emotions felt ... Jan |
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Re: Hourglass
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:22:15 PM AEST
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awwww! big hugs n' love nessa
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