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It Snowed Last Night
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:10:34 PM in AEST
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It snowed last night
Now everything is covered in white
How precious it looks?
How quiet and still?
How wonderful and magical it can feel?
When nature decides to cover the ground
With a blanket of white spread all around
To see the trees sparkling... glittering with silver gems
As the icicles hang in a row like shining diamonds
That the richest of people cannot possess
Have you ever thought...?
How amazing it is... that one tiny flake cannot be held in the hand
Without melting away?
But yet when packed together
What power they have...
What a punch they can carry when thrown
Have you ever walked in the moonlight
On the breast of a new fallen snow
And looked at the footprints left behind?
They remind me of those on the moon
Left by the astronauts in mid June
When the snow and wind are raging outside
You will be all snug and warm inside
Watching a fire roar on the hearth
And eating popcorn...
Feeling all warm and cozy inside....
Staring into the flames...
Thinking of all kinds of things...
What a vivd imagination one has in this light?
All because... it snowed last night
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Re: It Snowed Last Night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:13:47 PM AEST
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OMG!! This is so beautiful...what a picture you have painted here...Great write.... Makes me want to experience snow even more now...
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Re: It Snowed Last Night
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by Kie on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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| I agree with Jenni. This is breathtakingly beautiful. Kie |
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Re: It Snowed Last Night
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:50:27 PM AEST
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Excellent.. Good word usage..
Whisper
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Re: It Snowed Last Night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:22:56 AM AEST
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Your imagery is very good here. We had snow for one day this winter and it was so beautiful. I remember snows in Michigan though that lasted for 7-8 months and I still loved it. It is exactly like you described.
Rainbows,
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Re: It Snowed Last Night
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by a_bear on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:28:34 AM AEST
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| Have you ever red the poem by Silverstein...about the snowball that wet the bed then ran away?...your poem is beautiful as always, but for some reason I thought of that...I love snowflakes...falling outside my window while I read in front of the fire, or......well, it's almost spring now. Really great read. You always make me yearn for my youth.... |
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Re: It Snowed Last Night
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 03:48:01 AM AEST
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| Wow, beautiful images and lovely thoughts ... I enjoyed this very much ... Jan |
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