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Out of the Darkness
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:22:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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break me
take me
away
to the end
thrill me
kill me
wounds
which won't mend
Out of the darkness
I see the light which burns my eyes
Out of the crying
I hear the laughter I despise
see me
be me
thought
you would last?
crying
dying
horrible
isn't the past?
Out of this shadow
I see my way out
Out of this silence
I hear your shout
seethe
breathe
inhale
the fear
fright
fight
hold
back the tears
Out of this corner
I see my reflection, happy not mean
Out of this illusion
I see what's not meant to be seen
Copyright ©
PsychoticDreamz
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2004-03-21 23:22:14]
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Re: Out of the Darkness
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by IneedLove on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 11:56:50 PM AEST
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Wow, that was intresting. Good work!
-Cate |
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Re: Out of the Darkness
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 04:03:31 AM AEST
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Interesting indeed. I like the lines "Out of the darkness / I see the light which burns my eyes"
Good write.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Out of the Darkness
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:44:53 PM AEST
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ohhhh this was awesome! i loved this. i cant explain it but wow. great work
Arden |
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