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My Darkness
Contributed by
mary0005
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:04:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Does my color
Rub off on you?
Does it spread
To cover everything?
Or does it just keep to itself?
Does it stay with me, where its safe?
Or does it try to take over?
My darkness is a speck,
It doesnt become a night.
It is opposite of a single star,
Whose whiteness shines,
Lonely,
Through the dark, dark night.
But nobody yells at the star.
Night doesnt scold the star.
The star is loved.
But the light scolds me.
I am its darkness.
Im sorry for the night
I cause in your day.
White is always
Loved more than black.
Copyright ©
mary0005
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2004-03-22 00:04:52]
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Re: My Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:52:37 AM AEST
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Interesting poem.
I'm not really sure what to make of it, but I can tell you that I did like your use of a star for your subject's analogy. |
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