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Silver Wedding Anniversary
Contributed by
Hurretje
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:32:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Silver Wedding Anniversary Day after day Week in - week out Months passing by Yet another year Cold food - same time same lack (of taste) Beyond appetite Dirty socks - same place (more or less) same smell Tons of them * ...Endless whining... - somewhere... toppled over the edge of my consciousness... Please...say smething..anything..? - wherever you are... STUFF IT TUMBLE OVER THEM Mmm..sweet, young - quiet - embrace Devouring sugary Cartland with even sweeter - understanding - Osbourne * Who is it - constantly invading my peace? Who is it - grumbling behind the daily news? Never seductive silk Never revealing roses On this lonely way * ...Delirious..wandering..lost..who... ...where am I... The cool, silken touch of your hand - guides me ...Anxious..struggling..naked..how... ...falling..no..I... The steady, rocky hold of your arms - shelters me * It's Me and You You and Me it is Just Us On this lonely way Together
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Re: Silver Wedding Anniversary
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dina on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 06:35:44 AM AEST (User
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Are you sure it is only a silver anniversary? It seems like forever and ever. Anyway, really felt and really strong. |
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Re: Silver Wedding Anniversary
(User Rating: 1 ) by gery_giggles on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:25:18 PM AEST (User
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this was a good poem...it sounds very frustrating but yet there seems to be happiness^_^
luv always |
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Re: Silver Wedding Anniversary
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:38:49 AM AEST (User
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Sweetly wrapped..thoughts paraded in a rhythmic way..good free verse. venkat |
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