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Urges
Contributed by
silent
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:26:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The urge to kill is strong to me
A release of the mind from the trap I feel
This kind of trap is hard to see
As the one it traps is only me
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silent
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2004-03-22 11:26:40]
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Re: Urges
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 12:57:42 PM AEST
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nice one, i like short straight to the point poems
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Re: Urges
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by Lionel on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 01:29:04 PM AEST
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| Man, I don't know what to think about this. Should I report you to the police? |
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Re: Urges
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by full_blur on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 04:08:08 PM AEST
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| powerful, and well worded. The poem is short, but the sentence structure is very interesting |
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Re: Urges
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by Mortis-Dark on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:55:15 PM AEST
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Nice and short, Not to many words to cloud the meaning. Great Write
Sincerely,
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